requirements from the student: This is a comparative paper. · Mainly need to modify the grammar first. · And embellish/modify every topic sentence of each body paragraph and the conclusion.

requirements from the student: This is a comparative paper. · Mainly need to modify the grammar first. · And embellish/modify every topic sentence of each body paragraph and the conclusion. · Need to add transition words, like conjunctions, to make the essay more fluent, some places are too rigid. · Modify some bad descriptions. · Need to add more content. · Modify Paragraph 2-3 more. · Anyway, modify in the way that you think will make the paper better. due in next 10-12 hrs